my obsession with rhyme
I am obsessed with rhyme as you can see it from my previous post here, here, here and many more..
I am delightfully surprise this morning as I was browsing through my facebook friends, that I found
one of my best friend was writing his own rhyme.. a sweet romantic poem,
you can read it here : Click this link
It is entitled WONT YOU I have no permission to republish it here, but I am sure he will be fine with it,
he is that cool!!
Won’t you come out of your room?
Won’t you come with me and see the sea waves?
I’ll wear my swim trunks so won’t you wear your swim suit?
Won’t you let me hold your hands as the sands shuffled through our feet?
A lot of things can’t be seen by eyes alone,
See how my heart sings when we sat side-by-side
As I see your face shined by the setting sun
I crazily hope that such day will never fade
Even think 365 days can change,
Therefore, won’t you?
Alot of questions, romantic one were being asked in this poem,
again and again repeatedly, rhetorically waiting for an answer, one that seems to be left unanswered.
It gives the reader a sense of hope, but yet summarized in the lonely and sad sentence : Won’t you?
The poet suggest that whoever this poem is meant to be is sadly not always compromising in his desperate romantic plea of doing fun stuff in the beach, in a lovely sunset. That is what I get from reading won’t you.
The feeling of a peaceful serenity emerge when the poet describe the sand “shuffling” through the lover’s feet, this is a strong feeling that any sane adult human being who have ever felt in love must have experienced.
The word “see” instead of “hear” used for the singing of the heart not only matches the previous line perfectly, but also it teaches us one thing, that human emotions can be visible through body language..
Remember the magic?
Remember the time you felt in love?
Do you want it back??
then Wont you must be an enjoyable read for you!
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